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Tuesday, December 17, 2019

Summer Learning Journey- Day 2 again


Just like the other activities, we had to do an assignment. This time, it was to compose a poem, a short one about how I might feel when I first set foot on the moon. Spoiler: I did a haiku. It is a type of poem. It has 5 syllables to start with then 7 then back to 5. I really enjoyed doing it, so here's my poem.

 I did it on a google drawing to make it more interesting and colourful.

 If you can't see it very well, the link is right       here.
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4 comments:

  1. Eliza - SLJDecember 17, 2019 at 2:06 PM

    Kia ora Abigail :)

    Thanks for doing week one, day two, activity two! I think the poem you’ve made is very creative and unique, i’m so glad you enjoyed doing it! A haiku is a pretty cool form of poetry. If you had the chance to go to the moon, would you? I also really like how you’ve created a poster in google draw - this makes your post more eye-catching and effective, and will bring more people to your blog!

    I can also see that you’ve attributed the image - that’s so great well done! However it would be even better if you posted the exact link to where you got the image from, this way we know exactly where it’s come from :)

    Thanks for posting and keep up the awesome mahi!
    Eliza :)

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 9, 2020 at 7:17 PM

    Hi Abigail.
    I very like your blog post.
    Hope you do more SLJ so I can read them every weekend.
    If you want to see my blog here it is.
    https://wpsizumim.blogspot.com/
    Bye.

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2020 at 11:27 AM

    Well hello Abigail

    Astonishing blog post Abigail. I love the poem you made. I see you have a pasaion on writing, do you? I think this is an amazing blog post. Keep it up Abigail.

    -Pao ;)

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 28, 2020 at 5:24 PM

    Hello Abigail,
    Great blog post filled of detail and very informative. I enjoyed how you added a good amount of writing. Maybe next time you could think about add something that makes you blog pop! Some eye-catching item. Apart from that great job and blog ya later

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