My narrative

My story

Last term, we have spent a long time to finish our narrative. We spent a day to edit our writing-today.  I think this will be on of my best stories in the beginning-middle of the year because I've done a lot of rephrasing in my writing. My favourite character in my story is Mountain Quill, who is Snow Griffin in my story. I imagine him walking like a lion but have the feather and looks of a falcon. 

We first had to get inspired from a photo. The source was slide of photos. We started to make a story with some of the parts of the brainstorm. What I think I need done next time is to put more language features. If you would like, tell what I can do to make my story more interesting.

Here is the link to my fabulous story. Down below where it says ''The mysterious Arctic''.

Here is the photo that I used to make my narrative